This was found in the woods and it said “Zepper 2016”. So someone probably made it in 2016 and it got lost. When people found it, this thing was totally fully covered with mud. The air was fully gone so people had to fill it with air. There was a suspicious thing on the top. It had some wheels on it and it looked kind of like a carriage. After it was full of air it started to fly,but then the people added a little camera so they could see where it was going to.
Kia ora Helen. I love the way you started your writing with some questions. That really grabbed my attention! The balloons remind me of one of my favourite books called Northern Lights. Next time if you use ctrl+shift+v to paste your writing then it won't go off the end of your blog like it has. Maybe you could show the rest of your class this tip.
ReplyDeleteI like your picture prompt. What do you think the suspicious thing on top of the balloon was used for? It looks a bit heavy.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to use the tip next time I copy my class' writing onto our blog. Keep up the great writing! Maria Mudgway