In the olden days, man used natural sources to make electricity. Man also created windmills to produce electricity from wind. Once four men worked together to make an enormous fan, They dreamt of a fan bigger than a windmill. They needed water from the lake to run the fan. After months of hard work and perseverance they finally succeeded. They made the most enormous fan in history. The four men turned on the fan, just then one of them took a cardboard box and started hurtling through the air, it felt like an adventure. This was to be his first incredible adventure and he couldn’t wait to find out where it would take him.
Kia ora Helen. Good job posting on your blog. If you press ctrl-shift-v your text will paste into the blog neatly and won't be on one huge line.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used science facts in your writing.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing, Helen. Lots of great vocabulary and descriptions. It sounds like this could be the first in a series of adventure stories.
ReplyDeleteVery impressed Helen. I also can see a lot more stories coming from this one!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing Helen. I wonder what will happen next......
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