Monday 27 July 2020

The Possums

Kia Ora, this is my writing for week 1. I hope you like it, so please feel free to leave any positive comments to encourage my learning.


Carefully, the little Possums held onto their dear mother, doubting if they would slip. One Moment later, loudly the clouds became darker. It started raining and there was a storm. So she got to the top of the enormous tree she was climbing and got her little ones warm. 

The possum had big eyes and elegant black and brown fur. She went up the branch carrying her young. Soon the rain became harder and there was a flood. It was too dangerous for the little possums. While the mother possum jumped to the next tree, one of the possums tried to jump too, but he failed instead he fell into the flood. When the mother possum heard a splash he jumped into the flood, even though she didn’t like water that much just like the other possums. Gladly she got the little possum, and climbed up the tree where the other possums was.  In just a few moments the little possum opened its eyes. 


Gladly after three nights and two days the flood was over. Early the next day after the flood the mother possum went to get the little ones food. Carefully as she was jumping from tree to tree, she saw a garden full of food. She got there as swiftly as she could get, she got the food that she could hold and ran. When she got to  all of her kids she was so happy to see them playing kindly and cheerfully. 

Tuesday 21 July 2020

Happy Zone

Kia Ora, this is a slide that I made about feeling happy in the Green zone. I hope you like it, please feel free to leave any positive comments to encourage me in my learning.

Friday 3 July 2020

Holding on.....

Kia Ora, this is my last writing for term two it is called "Holding on..". I also hope you have a nice holiday "Happy holiday everyone".  It is an exciting story hope you like it.

                                       
The little boy was getting ready for bed, he crept into his bed and he fell aslee...p because he was so tired from school. After an hour or two, everyone was asleep and he was the only one awake. Then he closes his eyes and opens his eyes again. He was surprised that  it was morning and he was not in his room, he was under water. There he found something swooshing across him. It had an enormous tail, he held onto the tail and off he went.It was the most exciting ride he had  ever experienced,  Even better than the highest, fastest rollercoaster!The boy held on to the fish’s tail with both hands as it glided through the water. Its scales felt slimy and slippery, yet his grip remained strong.

He was amazed but at the same time he was wondering where the fish would take him. Maybe into a cave or into a mysterious place with gold and diamonds. He was hoping to go to a cave with crystals, because he learned about them in school. When the fish stopped he wondered what kind of fish it was, it was an extraordinary very rarely seen fish. He was fascinated when he heard the fish talking. The fish jumped once and said you must, the fish repeated this more than five times. Then it jumped again and said:  you really must……..

There he was in his bedroom, and standing there was his dad holding on the door. His dad said to him “you really must stop laughing because everyone one is awake because of your laughter. Then he realised it was a dream. His dad asked him what kind of dream he had. Then he told them the crazy dream he had and they all went back to bed and fell aslee….p.



Wednesday 1 July 2020

The Artist

Kia Ora, this is my writing that I did for week twelve, hope you like it.\
                         


The little girl Ava who lived in France longed to be an artist from her young age. She would  just draw something and it would come to life. Her Father was an artist in the village. Whenever Ava found her father painting she would always knock down the drawing and spill paint on it and the paintings came to life. Ava’s parents were really proud of her.

 Ava was the best drawer in the countryside, she loved going to a garden which was a quiet place. There in the Garden she would sit for hours and work on one of her drawings.  Once she sat in her room and started drawing, it took her hours of work.  She was drawing a ship. After hours of work she had finished. As Ava spoke the magic word, the ship’s sails started to flutter as if a strong breeze blew through the room. She loved this moment, seeing her creations come to life. It was the best thing she could ever imagine.       

She had done so many other drawings but this was the best one yet. All the other one were 3D too. Her 3D drawings were about humans, animals, rocks, nature and the best one of them was ships and boats. Ava had sold all of her other drawings except for  the ships and boats.  The museum asked for the ship but she was not willing to give it, but when her parents told her to give it to the museum she gave it. That was because she never ever wanted to hurt anyone’s feelings, especially her parents. Then after a year or two her family had to go to the city to live there. Even though she had moved houses from the village, she never forgot the people in the village and the people in the village never forgot her. 

 If I could draw anything and it would come to life I would draw a puppy because I really want a puppy. What would you draw?