Sick Sentences

     Sick Sentences

Sick Sentence: The man sat beside the gorilla. The gorilla comforted the man.

Upgraded Sentence:  Nervously, the man sat beside the Gorilla. The gorilla understood the man was sad, so the gorilla came near the man and comforted him.

Three little pigs

 Kia Ora, this is my slide about "the three little pigs", but it is kind of different, I hope you like it.

 

Orcas!!!!

Kia Ora, this is a slide that I made about Orcas, because they are my favourite animal.  What is your favorite animal and can you make up a word with something to do with your favourite animal, like I said orcasome in my slide. I hope you like it .

Mask off Competition!!!!

 Kia Ora, This is a mask that I made out of a sock, Here it is.

The Adventurer

 Kia Ora, this is a story that I wrote about this picture,  I hope you like it. I also drew a picture of how the view might look like from there if you look down.  I also got a question for you " Have you ever had a crazy adventure like this? 

Holding onto the support rope, he made his way towards the top. He really liked having crazy adventures, he even jumped out of the plane right into a swimming pool. It was so windy today and this was the first time that he got scared on his adventures. He carried on, when he got to the top he looked down, he was scared for a moment, he took a deep breath and he was off.  He jumped, he felt like a superhero going to rescue people. He was so high that he could even see the Eiffel tower. Can you ever imagine looking down from there?

Here is the picture that I drew:

The lost Ocean

Kia Ora,  this is a story that I wrote about this picture.  This was first an Ocean, but now it is just a place without any water. I also made a drawing of how this place might have looked before, you can scroll down to have a look at it. I was in a rush  so it is not really good but I still hope you like it. 

                   

This place was once a mighty ocean, but now there is not even a single drop of water. 20 years ago, the rain stopped and the sun shined so bright that the water dried up. That  time was so good, this place was filled with people, but now there is no one but me.    

Two months later….. 

Hey everyone it's me again, and I’ve got some exciting news. It rained yesterday and the ocean is back. It has been so long since I saw this many people here. 

                                               

What food I would like to make gigantic!!!

 Kia Ora, I hope you're all having a great time. This is a google drawing that I made about "what food I would like to make gigantic". I would like to make pancakes gigantic, what food would you like to make gigantic?

My Blog profile

Welcome to my blog profile. It is very important to share my goals and interests with you. This learning is important to all of us because we learn about what we can share publicly and we don't share all our personal details. I hope you like it.

The Discovery

Kia Orana, this is a writing that I did for this week, it is called "The Discovery". I hope you like it.

                       

Courageously, on a cold and foggy morning the explorers walked towards the skeleton. They were so cautious about it. First they thought that it was a species of the extinct elephant. But when they took a closer look they understood that it was an animal that was never discovered.

They took one of the bones which was part of the leg. They understood that the animal died from starvation. It was very cold so they left the bone there and went back. This was an enchanted place, there was no one there except the two explorers. They brought the bone to the museum and they were rewarded “best explorers of the year”.

 

The Climb

Kia Orana, this is my writing that I did this week. I hope you like it. 

                                                                 

Exhausted, the man walked up the slope. The sun was bright it started hurting his eyes. He stopped because he couldn't even look up because of the sun. The sky was blue, and the clouds started blocking the sun so he started walking up the mountain again. He looked forward to the view from the top.